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MarBall Comic Script 1. (Draft)

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(First panel has Candy Kingdom in the night time)

(Second panel zooms in on a lit window.)

(Third panel shows GB brushing his teeth, wearing the rock band T-shirt Marshall Lee gave him and red and white stripped boxers.)

GB: (singing happily, in a slightly dorky way) “Brush your teeth, brush them right, because horrors live in cavities, and they come out at night~!”

(Panel four: Hears a loud clatter in his room, GB jumps startled, turns around towards his door, and looks through the door, his eyes narrowed slightly in confusion, toothpaste dripping from his mouth)

(5th panel) GB: (GB is off panel and is calling from the bathroom, sounding confused/nervous) “Um…hello…?” (Can see the window is open and the curtains flowing in the breeze coming through the window)

(6th panel: GB walks out of the bathroom, his face clean, closes the window and shuts the curtains)

GB: “Weird—” (turns around)

(7th panel: Marshall comes into view, sitting on GB’s bed hunched over with his head slightly down cast but you can see a slightly sad look on his face, and GB jumps, scared to death) “OH GLOB!! Marshall Lee?! What the flip—?!(looks mortified for a moment)

(8th Panel: Marshall is unfazed by Gumball’s outburst, and maintains his blank, sad, expression, while looking down.)

(9th panel: GB is cut off from his ranting, and is off panel, but sounds concerned) GB: “Marshall…?”

 

End of Pg. 1

Script idea thing for a collab comic with Hootsweet. ;)
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I thought I was the only one who did this